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SHADDAIWRIGHT

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Masterpiece.

I presented this in my science class at school and immediately got expelled.

Found a few things off with this short.

First off, the voice acting. It sounded pretty dull and dragged out. (e.g. The girl's voice wasn't able to adapt to the characters feelings and it was hard to tell if their emotions were genuine or not) Secondly, the animation. It was a bit off-putting and choppy. Third of all, the cultural references. Now, this may seem extremely controversial based on the portrayal of the people from Nigeria and India. Personally, I wasn't really offended by it, but just a side note for the future.

In conclusion, the plot was okay, but the other aspects need a bit more work.

FloppyCalvin responds:

Thanks for the review, if you wanna see the same video with better animation just go to the 2022 one, but my animation is epic in my newest video "Floppy Friends - Moving In (Part 1)" I actually didn't animate this one... but I can say for a fact that if you want animation that at least looks as good as ATHF you can go to my recent. Other than that thanks for the review anyway :)

Liked the premise of this short!

My only take is that the animation was a tad bit choppy and sometimes, it didn't match what the characters were doing/saying. Despite the quality of the audio, the voice acting was pretty good!

In conclusion, animation needs a bit more pep and the VAs were good. Keep up the good work!

Nice twist, especially with the last part! This should definitely air worldwide instead of the cliché one lol

Batman should really appear in more VHS safety tapes lol

I liked this short, especially because of its animation and humor. The pacing at the beginning was a tad bit slow, but the last cut made up for it and actually made me chuckle a bit! Other than that, this short was pretty great!

"I have no choice whatsoever but to agree."

(I loved how clean the animation was, especially the lip sync visemes. Also, the voice acting and humor were excellent!)

Gray responds:

Thank You!

Engaging stories. The animation was okay. Some lines were clean, others were not. The sound leveling is off (some things sound quieter/louder than others) But other than that, this short was great!

4 stars, my friend.

Oh snap, this version is lit! Honestly, I had no idea that the movie was supposed to be this way, but now it actually feels engaging and fun. 10/10

Another entertaining short from you. I really liked how the comedy played out through the short. And you brought out a major point: Bananas with spots, are in fact, barely bananas at all.

P.S. Thanks to the last few frames, I won't be sleeping tonight.

Welp...

S.K. WRIGHT @SHADDAIWRIGHT

Age 17, Male

Animator/Writer/VA

Kendall Greens HS (Graduated)

Miami, Florida, USA

Joined on 9/17/20

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